Modern English Tanka
.
replacing each other
seasons come and go
under the moon
every step I have taken
leads to your door
.
just before dawn
nine rosebuds
rest on the pillow
ready to bloom
for each shared year
.
weeping willow
we've passed every day
is sawed down
I can tell by your face
that you miss it
.
all rights reserved © Natalia L. Rudychev
Modern English Tanka, Winter 2006, Volume 1, Number 2, 124
replacing each other
seasons come and go
under the moon
every step I have taken
leads to your door
.
just before dawn
nine rosebuds
rest on the pillow
ready to bloom
for each shared year
.
weeping willow
we've passed every day
is sawed down
I can tell by your face
that you miss it
.
all rights reserved © Natalia L. Rudychev
Modern English Tanka, Winter 2006, Volume 1, Number 2, 124
posted by Natalia L. Rudychev at 2:02 AM
3 Comments:
Lovely! So beautifully said I could see it all. Best wishes for the new yea!
Don Iannone
Thank you! You are very kind!
Best wishes to you too!
Hello Gel,
Thank you! I've enjoyed my visit to your blog! Your writing always makes me think about so many things.
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