SP Quill
the poppies
(triptych)
only the beaks
poke out of the green shells
the poppies at birth
.
so dense is aroma
the poppies in midday fields
the air trembles
.
alas... i've missed
red butterflies dancing
the poppies farewell
.
SP Quill , Spring 2006 (volume 10), 36
.
all rights reserved © Natalia L. Rudychev
(triptych)
only the beaks
poke out of the green shells
the poppies at birth
.
so dense is aroma
the poppies in midday fields
the air trembles
.
alas... i've missed
red butterflies dancing
the poppies farewell
.
SP Quill , Spring 2006 (volume 10), 36
.
all rights reserved © Natalia L. Rudychev
posted by Natalia L. Rudychev at 6:42 AM
6 Comments:
I enjoyed the way this began with a comparison to an animal: "only the beaks" It implies movement and so much more.
Christine
Thank you.
I'm glad you like it.
I love your work. And your tuning into the spirit of nature through words. And thanks for visiting my site.
Dear Ardi
Thank you.
I'm happy these words touched your soul. Glad to see you here.
Glad I found you. And thanks for visiting River-Tree Whispers.
Ardi,
Thank you. I enjoted my visit.
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