red lights
.
downpour...
your sandals still run
on the lawn
while you sip jasmine tea
in my room
.
two-day moon
cuts through the night
leaving a mark
on the poem
yet to be written
.
all rights reserved © Natalia L. Rudychev
.
red lights, Vol. 3, No. 1, January 2007
downpour...
your sandals still run
on the lawn
while you sip jasmine tea
in my room
.
two-day moon
cuts through the night
leaving a mark
on the poem
yet to be written
.
all rights reserved © Natalia L. Rudychev
.
red lights, Vol. 3, No. 1, January 2007
posted by Natalia L. Rudychev at 7:00 AM
6 Comments:
The second is excellent, the net in Asia is sooo sllow it take ages just to get to your blog and comment!Happy New Year
Hi N,
I like each of these stanzas as separte poems as well as one entire piece. The blocks or red lights that you present are done so in a unique way.
lovely stuff
john
Pus Ultra
Thank you!
Happy New Year to you too!
Hi, Gel
Thank you for your words of encouragement.
Thank you, John!
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