Tuesday, January 09, 2007

red lights

.
downpour...
your sandals still run
on the lawn
while you sip jasmine tea
in my room
.

two-day moon
cuts through the night
leaving a mark
on the poem
yet to be written
.

all rights reserved © Natalia L. Rudychev
.
red lights, Vol. 3, No. 1, January 2007

6 Comments:

Blogger Plus Ultra said...

The second is excellent, the net in Asia is sooo sllow it take ages just to get to your blog and comment!Happy New Year

3:10 PM  
Blogger GeL (Emerald Eyes) said...

Hi N,
I like each of these stanzas as separte poems as well as one entire piece. The blocks or red lights that you present are done so in a unique way.

4:04 AM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

lovely stuff
john

8:45 AM  
Blogger Natalia L. Rudychev said...

Pus Ultra

Thank you!
Happy New Year to you too!

3:38 AM  
Blogger Natalia L. Rudychev said...

Hi, Gel

Thank you for your words of encouragement.

3:40 AM  
Blogger Natalia L. Rudychev said...

Thank you, John!

3:41 AM  

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