Tuesday, January 09, 2007

red lights

your sandals still run
on the lawn
while you sip jasmine tea
in my room

two-day moon
cuts through the night
leaving a mark
on the poem
yet to be written

all rights reserved © Natalia L. Rudychev
red lights, Vol. 3, No. 1, January 2007


Blogger Plus Ultra said...

The second is excellent, the net in Asia is sooo sllow it take ages just to get to your blog and comment!Happy New Year

3:10 PM  
Blogger GeL (Emerald Eyes) said...

Hi N,
I like each of these stanzas as separte poems as well as one entire piece. The blocks or red lights that you present are done so in a unique way.

4:04 AM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

lovely stuff

8:45 AM  
Blogger Natalia L. Rudychev said...

Pus Ultra

Thank you!
Happy New Year to you too!

3:38 AM  
Blogger Natalia L. Rudychev said...

Hi, Gel

Thank you for your words of encouragement.

3:40 AM  
Blogger Natalia L. Rudychev said...

Thank you, John!

3:41 AM  

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